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Experimenting with photoshop :)
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Critique by TheVaudevillePrince Feb 5, 2012, 4:13:08 AM
Ah, wonderful! This is my first critique, so please no hating. ;^;

Anyways...

The quality is awkward, but its amazing besides that. :3

The snow looks very much like skin, however. Maybe adding some extra texture, airbrushing it or using the band aid tool would help. Also, maybe adding some extra magenta to the flower itself would make the photograph more vibrant and fun to look at.

The pose is excellent, I must say. ^^ And the leaves have a nice lighting to them. Accept for the snow's strange texture, the soft shadow is effective.

Its most certainly a wonderful piece of art.
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Love the contrast between the snow and the rose. It's quite stunning. The angle with the leaves almost forming an arrow, pointing to the red, which keep the eye focused on the flower. I love the texture under the rose. The snow makes a nice textural contrast with the petals.

The flower itself isn't very red. It's almost faded or desaturated a little. But the leaves seem very green and not desaturated. It would make more of an impact if you bumped up the saturation on the flower to that it equaled the intensity of the leaves or was greater then the leaves.

All in all, it has a nice impact and vision, but there are a lot of similar images of roses and snow. Something to keep in mind. Beautiful image.
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froz33 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
The way that one of the leaves and some of the petals are squashed against the ground suggests both an awkward fall with force, and a clumsy foolish anthromorphic quality to the rose. The beauty of the rose is still evident suggesting that love, or the rose retains its grace and nobility in base circumstance. The snow represents both purity, innocence, and cold hard reality, which we can all trip over sometimes. The snow is barely marked by the downfall of the rose, conveying that innocence, or reality is not seriously affected by the falling of the love.
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
:hug:
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aleiz Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
looks amazing
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:iconsunima:
Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
:hug:
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aleiz Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
^^
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Trinitite Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautiful.
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fireheartsilverwind Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awesome! :D
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The-Dark-Lord-Link Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely! Well done!
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newboldworld Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
Superb! :-)
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Flying-Fossa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
Simple and beautiful :)
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
thankyou ^^
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:iconrizing1:
Rizing1 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Beautiful!
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
glad to hear you think so :hug:
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sonia-p Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
So beautiful.
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
:hug: thankyou!
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:iconintrepidtee:
IntrepidTee Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That picture is too beautiful for words. :love:
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
haha xD
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Kurrona Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very beautiful~
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thankyou :)
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Kurrona Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
youre welcome~
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red-winged-angel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely!
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thankyou ^^
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:iconred-winged-angel:
red-winged-angel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome!
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LillaDraakon Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's looks so real I love it
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
um... :O it is real...
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LillaDraakon Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh kewl srry
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Osmostrix Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
Very nice!
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
:hug: thankyou!
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Tigare Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wait, you mean that's a picture and not an actual flower?
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:iconsunima:
Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
its a photo
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Draaky Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wath did you do :?
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:iconsunima:
Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
?
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Draaky Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wath did you photoshop :?
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
i took the photo outside and fixed it in photoshop... ?
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Johhy55 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
Pretty!
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Kikzor Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
Lovely! It reminded me of Tom Waits' song "Trampled rose".
Alison Krauss and Robert Plant have a lovely version of it too.


I found it in the street
At first I did not see
Lying at my feet
A trampled rose
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Unistonen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
Looks lovely! :D
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Sunima Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thankyou ^^
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